1st Draft

Begin Writing Here: One late night Lucy and Maria went to the tree house, It was a large treehouse, they walk closer to the treehouse just to see what is inside it. Lucy and Maria went inside the house and they said “This is so messy who even lives here”, Lucy and Maria are not being nice to the tree house. Maria asked “Lucy can we go inside the room”,

“sure said Lucy “ so they both when inside. When they were about to go home. It was getting dark so they decided to sleep inside the tree house for one night. When they are about to sleep it started to rain and rain, the tree fell down “Lucy screamed! Maria got up “what happened Lucy?”

“I don’t want to stay here anymore”

“Why”

“It not like i don’t like it here”

Lucy said “it’s because I want to go home and stay with my family”

“OK” said Maria.

“I promise we will go home tomorrow in the morning”

“Right” replied Lucy.

They both slept very early so they could wake up early tomorrow. At 4 o'clock in the morning, Lucy and Maria woke up  and the door was locked .

“ What’s is going on!” They both shouted.

So they were thinking how to get out of the house, so they sat down and think about it when they were thinking they heard a noise.

“What is that noise” They both wondered

“I don’t know I am very scared” Maria said.

They look at the window they saw a big bear they were very scared so they stay quiet. And they both got in big trouble because they went too far and not telling their mum or dad where they are going when you are going somewhere your family's need to know so you don’t get in trouble. And also even though your family know where you are going just don’t do like this.